Are we there yet

              Are we there yet 

“Daaaaaad!

We left at 8.am and It's 2.pm now I need to pee so bad stop the car!” 

“jaisha stop screaming in my ears!” dad said. “Oreo gets off me, Mum oreo keeps on jumping on me!” 

“oh just let him be”

 “but mum actually fine! I'll just throw him out the window!!” 

“oh, jaisha stop it!” 

“Daaaaaad! I need to pee so bad!! Stop the car!!”

“Can you please just wait a little bit longer?, I told you to go before we left the house and you didn’t go!!”

“That's because I didn't need to go before!!!!!” I hate this car trip and can’t wait to get there.

“Ok can you just play some music,” I said.

“No, I prefer peace and quiet.”

But dad oh jaisha stop it  

Are we there yet just wait we have two more hours. Daaaaaad! I said in angrily voice are we there yet I said for the second time 

On we have one more hour left dad said

Ok fine I'll wait. 20 minutes later dad are we there yet on! We have 30 minutes left he said ok fine i said. 10 minutes later are we there yet noooooo! Mum said ok stop screaming I said then stop asking us mum said ok fine if we don’t get there in 40 minutes am going to cry I said oh my god fine she said 40 minutes later are we there yet I said yes said mum ok i’m getting out of the car but grandma is not home mum said but I need to pee can you wait 5 minutes dad said nooooo! I said jaisha we don’t have the key’s but I need to pee there you go, grandma, is here

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  1. Philiprip13 April 2021 at 15:52

    I love the way you have used speech marks to show when someone is talking. Also good to only have one speaker talking on each line.

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