Getting stuck.

 Stuck


On Friday I went to the park with Angeleen and Aaira. We were playing hide & seek. I was seeking and they were hiding. I looked behind the tree and inside the little house that was there but I couldn't find them. I sat on a swing and thought where they had gone. 20 minutes passed and I’m still waiting.


I heard a scream from behind the tree. I got scared so I tried to get out but I couldn't and then I realized that I was stuck. There was a lady with blond hair with blue eyes. 

I asked her what her name was and she told me it was Michelle. I asked her if she could help me get out of the swing I was sitting in. “Michelle, could you please pull me out of this swing?.”

“Uh, I'm sorry but I have to go somewhere. It's an emergency.”

“Oh. That's fine..” 


I saw this scary-looking man walking past me. Maybe I should ask him. I thought. 

“Excuse me, could you please try and help me out of this swing, I'm stuck..” 

“Oh of course let me try.” The man said.

“Thank you so much!”

He put his bag of groceries down and pulled me out.

“Thanks so much again!!” I said.

“No worries! I love helping people!”

Comments

  1. Philiprip4 August 2021 at 02:18

    I like your beginning, middle and end. You have set out the dialogue correctly using speech marks and only having one speaker on each line. What happened to Aaira and Angeleen? Why didn't they help you?

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